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Part of my "Sophmore project" for 
I don't think there's anything I need to write, since I did the drawn version, right?
In the Extras section, that's a neclace that her ex-boyfriend Zach gave her that she still wears, her State Alchemist pocket watch, the bracelet she wears her circle on, and a bigger version of her circle.
I feel like my art skills weren't quite up to the challenge at some points, but I really tried, so I hope it turned out okay
I'm not going to pick at all the things I don't like about it xD
I don't think there's anything I need to write, since I did the drawn version, right?
In the Extras section, that's a neclace that her ex-boyfriend Zach gave her that she still wears, her State Alchemist pocket watch, the bracelet she wears her circle on, and a bigger version of her circle.
I feel like my art skills weren't quite up to the challenge at some points, but I really tried, so I hope it turned out okay
I'm not going to pick at all the things I don't like about it xDImage size
2211x6213px 2.42 MB
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Heads and Body:
I really like her hairstyle it’s really unique I haven’t seen it before! Her eye shape is ok! It is simple yet uncommon o3o/. Just one small thing, you forgot to add the eyebrows in your OC’s face. Could you add them, please? Remember that people have different eyebrow shapes and there are different eyebrow’s types so let us know which one your OC has.
Color Pallet:
Though the color combination is also original (that kind of blonde hair with green eyes), the pallet doesn’t fit FMA at all. The colors are way too saturated. I can help you if you want, note me when you are ready!
Height Chart and Main Outfits:
You didn’t use properly the height chart, but I think it’s still understandable. However I think it would be best if you fix it. If you have problems with it you can ask for help. We’ll be glad to help you.
I’m sorry, but I must say that her outfits are still too plain, they don’t stand out at all. Remember FMA characters have very specific outfits that make them unique. The fourth one looks more dynamic and interesting, but the other ones need more work o3o/. If she is a state alchemist she should have a more interesting style. Keep playing around and look at references.
Others:
I like the fact that you put her alchemy devices in there and the necklace of her boyfriend ouo. Good choices for a state alchemist!
Well the review is over. One more thing, you still haven’t answered the critique on your OC’s profile o3o/. Answer that one first, please and leave this one for later.
Good luck!
I really like her hairstyle it’s really unique I haven’t seen it before! Her eye shape is ok! It is simple yet uncommon o3o/. Just one small thing, you forgot to add the eyebrows in your OC’s face. Could you add them, please? Remember that people have different eyebrow shapes and there are different eyebrow’s types so let us know which one your OC has.
Color Pallet:
Though the color combination is also original (that kind of blonde hair with green eyes), the pallet doesn’t fit FMA at all. The colors are way too saturated. I can help you if you want, note me when you are ready!
Height Chart and Main Outfits:
You didn’t use properly the height chart, but I think it’s still understandable. However I think it would be best if you fix it. If you have problems with it you can ask for help. We’ll be glad to help you.
I’m sorry, but I must say that her outfits are still too plain, they don’t stand out at all. Remember FMA characters have very specific outfits that make them unique. The fourth one looks more dynamic and interesting, but the other ones need more work o3o/. If she is a state alchemist she should have a more interesting style. Keep playing around and look at references.
Others:
I like the fact that you put her alchemy devices in there and the necklace of her boyfriend ouo. Good choices for a state alchemist!
Well the review is over. One more thing, you still haven’t answered the critique on your OC’s profile o3o/. Answer that one first, please and leave this one for later.
Good luck!